I'm not that great at illustration work but i had a shot anyway.
I think the colours compliment the style of linework really well. I especially like her hand that's on the side of the ball and the way the pinky finger sticks out from the other fingers. Nice one. :)
dont be hard on yerself, this is nice!
If you're going for a casual in style exercise then mission accomplished, it's really nicely handled. But as an illustration I think this piece could do with a bit more narrative. Maybe some characters interacting in the bg? a whale spouting? some birdies flying by? Even if the girl wasn't dead center in the composition it might liven things up a bit. Having her cropped at the ankles is a bit awkward too.but yeah, rad stuff overall. I wish I had half your sketchbook ethic.
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